I gave your character demo a 5 just to be safe, but generally, the Portal isn't too kind on tests and demos. Also, smokers usually smoke underhand, check 'em out (as very few public buildings allow smoking anymore). Looks great, try not to do the out of focus stuff unless there's depth movement, or you're just starting a scene. Best of luck gentlemen!
i appreciate it! i've received good direction as to where to be posting WIPs and things that aren't ready to be viewed, but need critiques.
I appreciate the the score and the critiques even more!
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VicariousE
I gave your character demo a 5 just to be safe, but generally, the Portal isn't too kind on tests and demos. Also, smokers usually smoke underhand, check 'em out (as very few public buildings allow smoking anymore). Looks great, try not to do the out of focus stuff unless there's depth movement, or you're just starting a scene. Best of luck gentlemen!
aobomb
i appreciate it! i've received good direction as to where to be posting WIPs and things that aren't ready to be viewed, but need critiques.
I appreciate the the score and the critiques even more!
thanks for taking the time to comment